Observation of my oral presentation

Did you use visual support?
Did you show/talk about the photos in the point to the audience?

Did you look at your audience most of the time?
Did you read from notes?
Did you do any gegstures/movement to hold the attention of your audience?

Did you organize you ideas in order of importance?
Did you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear?
Wich ones?

Did you introduce interesting information to you audience?
Was yourinformation more superficial or more detailed and original?

Did you check your grammar?
Did you use sentence linkers?
Did you use fillers?

Did you know how to pronounce all your words?
Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary a classmate or the teacher?
Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone al the time?
Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?

Catalan referendum: Catalonia has 'won right to statehood'

-What shocked me was the way the Civil Guard acted. They injured kids, old people, men, woman and dogs. I don't know where did they get that fury for kiking, grabbing, dragging and punching people who they only wanted to vote.

-What I don't agree with is the way that the Governament took it. There were a milion ways of stopping us from voting. Catalan people only wanted to vote passively and with respect but it truned that the Prime Minister orded the Civil Guard to take the urns and the ballots, and they tried but at the try they hurted 900 people.

-What headlines do you agree with?